It's okay for a beginner piece, it could definitely use a lot more work on the fire effect. Flame isn't always plain and stationary, it has flares that come off the tip of a fire;
Example:
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Just a bit of nitpicking, the M is not too bad, either, nothing really to say about it. Constructive criticism is all you need to become better at doing things like this, and I'm here to give said criticism
Example:
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Just a bit of nitpicking, the M is not too bad, either, nothing really to say about it. Constructive criticism is all you need to become better at doing things like this, and I'm here to give said criticism