B3RZ3RK3R_Olei Engineer Application

[olei]

Hi, I am  B3RZ3RK3R_Olei and I am here to apply for engineer. I am a builder since march 3(2014). I built a big iron house with some redstone sistems on it. I hope the redstone I  used is enough to be engineer. I want to be an engineer to be able to help my friends being engineers by spawning them some redstone items. I also want to get the highest rank so I can be a moderator(when the applications open) by a easier way. By the way, I have already made my engineer application. I hope you like my building! I want to feel kind of important on the server...the colours of my name change and my rank, instead of builder, is engineer...and that makes me being more important to the server. I hope people to start respecting me more than they already do. In the server, I know some cool people: Th3_Night_Shadow, pmrs99, Hotch_, portugalense, rodas, darioborges, BlueStar5, baroompsycho, exigopro, lepid_123, TheAmazingBobert and a lot of other people. I think that i deserve this rank because I worked several hours on my engineer application(building and the application itself) and I think I deserve a reward. Before showing the builds, I want to thank to some people that helped me understanding redstone: AiriSchwartz (after helping me, I realized that she is really cool), portugalense, 1mn50 (i dont know his full name) aaron7(dont know his name too). Here are some pics of the building:
The outside of my building:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOu
The 1ºfloor:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOB
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOl
The 0ºfloor:
This is a redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngd
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgX
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj7
The -1ºfloor
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOn
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgS
Redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOz
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOW
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjI
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgN
Random room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng4
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgI
Redstone sistem of the room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjH
Automatic farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOx
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgP
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng6
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgQ
Redstone sistem of the farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjT
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjX
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njd
Random road:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng0
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngm
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgT
Random road´s redstone stuff:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng9
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngq
Automatic sugar cane farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njf
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njt
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj1
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjO
I am working on other redstone thing. I tried to make an elevator but it was too fast so I destroyed it. Now i will make other thing.
Thanks for the comments (baroom, joaonaruto6 and Officialguy)!!! Thanks for reading!

[joaonaruto6]

Add a  bit more information and ill suport you.
NEUTRAL

[baroompsycho]

A lot of the pictures you posted were repeats of one another, could you clean that up as well as add a short description of what each redstone build does? From what I see so far, there aren't too many redstone builds that are complex, so please create 3-4 complex and unique ones. Also, please include much more information as to why you would like this rank. I suggest taking a look at other accepted Engineer applications to see around how much information you need! Thanks!

[baroompsycho]

From what I see right now, I think you still need at least 6-8 long structured sentences as the information portion of your application should be a large paragraph. A description of each redstone build and how it works is also needed, and the pictures should probably be showing the redstone underneath too. I think there was only one new build (it didn't seem to be that complex? :/), so you still need more. Good luck.

[Officialguy]

Support.

[baroompsycho]

Hi, I am  B3RZ3RK3R_Olei and I am here to apply for engineer. I am a builder since march 3(2014). I built a big iron house with some redstone sistems on it. I hope the redstone I  used is enough to be engineer. I want to be an engineer to be able to help my friends being engineers by spawning them some redstone items. I also want to get the highest rank so I can be a moderator(when the applications open) by a easier way. I hope you like my building! I want to feel kind of important on the server...the colours of my name change and my rank, instead of builder, is engineer...and that makes me being more important to the server. Here are some pics:
The outside of my build
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOu
The 1ºfloor
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOB
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOl
The 0ºfloor
This is a redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngd
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgX
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj7
The -1ºfloor
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOn
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgS
Redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOz
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOW
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjI
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgN
Random room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng4
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgI
Redstone sistem of the room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjH
Automatic farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOx
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgP
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng6
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgQ
Redstone sistem of the farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjT
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjX
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njd
Random road:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng0
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngm
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgT
Random road´s redstone stuff:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng9
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngq
Thanks for the comments (baroom, joaonaruto6 and Officialguy)!!! Thanks for reading!

Unfortunately, you still need much more information as to why you would like the rank/why you think you deserve this rank along with more complex redstone creations. I strongly suggest looking at all the other accepted Engineer applications to see around how much information and what the complexity of each redstone build should be. Right now, I think there are only 5 simple redstone builds, so at least create 3-4 more complex and unique ones.

[baroompsycho]

Hi, I am  B3RZ3RK3R_Olei and I am here to apply for engineer. I am a builder since march 3(2014). I built a big iron house with some redstone sistems on it. I hope the redstone I  used is enough to be engineer. I want to be an engineer to be able to help my friends being engineers by spawning them some redstone items. I also want to get the highest rank so I can be a moderator(when the applications open) by a easier way. I hope you like my building! I want to feel kind of important on the server...the colours of my name change and my rank, instead of builder, is engineer...and that makes me being more important to the server. I hope people to start respecting me more than they already do. In the server, I know some cool people: Th3_Night_Shadow, pmrs99, Hotch_, portugalense, rodas, darioborges, BlueStar5, baroompsycho, exigopro, lepid_123, TheAmazingBobert and a lot of other people. I think that i deserve this rank because I worked several hours on my engineer application(building and the application itself) and I think I deserve a reward. Here are some pics of the building:
The outside of my building:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOu
The 1ºfloor:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOB
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOl
The 0ºfloor:
This is a redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngd
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgX
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj7
The -1ºfloor
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOn
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgS
Redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOz
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOW
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjI
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgN
Random room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng4
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgI
Redstone sistem of the room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjH
Automatic farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOx
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgP
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng6
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgQ
Redstone sistem of the farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjT
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjX
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njd
Random road:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng0
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngm
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgT
Random road´s redstone stuff:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng9
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngq
Automatic sugar cane farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njf
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njt
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj1
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjO
Thanks for the comments (baroom, joaonaruto6 and Officialguy)!!! Thanks for reading!

Hmm, here are two recent Engineer applications that I thought were really well done, and I suggest taking a look at them since that's what we're looking for. The first one is TheDarkWolf: http://forums.kaise123.com/index.php?topic=4220.0 and the second one is from Luxey: http://forums.kaise123.com/index.php?topic=3584.0

You don't need to have as much information as them, but around half of the amount they have would suffice!

Like I said before, you do need a solid and rather large information portion of your application as well as multiple complex, different, and unique builds! Simple builds would be piston doors, an automated farm, a simple piston pushing up a block, etc. This rank is incredibly hard to achieve as you need to learn the ins and outs of redstone to the point where you can give an tutorial on how to use it to a new player. If your information section isn't lengthy enough, make up for it with the complexity and awesomeness of your redstone creations! Hopefully, this will give you a better understanding of how much you need to put into the application?

[baroompsycho]

Hi, I am  B3RZ3RK3R_Olei and I am here to apply for engineer. I am a builder since march 3(2014). I built a big iron house with some redstone sistems on it. I hope the redstone I  used is enough to be engineer. I want to be an engineer to be able to help my friends being engineers by spawning them some redstone items. I also want to get the highest rank so I can be a moderator(when the applications open) by a easier way. By the way, I have already made my engineer application. I hope you like my building! I want to feel kind of important on the server...the colours of my name change and my rank, instead of builder, is engineer...and that makes me being more important to the server. I hope people to start respecting me more than they already do. In the server, I know some cool people: Th3_Night_Shadow, pmrs99, Hotch_, portugalense, rodas, darioborges, BlueStar5, baroompsycho, exigopro, lepid_123, TheAmazingBobert and a lot of other people. I think that i deserve this rank because I worked several hours on my engineer application(building and the application itself) and I think I deserve a reward. Before showing the builds, I want to thank to some people that helped me understanding redstone: AiriSchwartz (after helping me, I realized that she is really cool), portugalense, 1mn50 (i dont know his full name) aaron7(dont know his name too). Here are some pics of the building:
The outside of my building:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOu
The 1ºfloor:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOB
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOl
The 0ºfloor:
This is a redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngd
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgX
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj7
The -1ºfloor
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOn
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgS
Redstone gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOz
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOW
Redstone sistem of the gate:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjI
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgN
Random room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng4
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgI
Redstone sistem of the room:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjH
Automatic farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NOx
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgP
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng6
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgQ
Redstone sistem of the farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjT
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjX
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njd
Random road:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng0
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngm
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NgT
Random road´s redstone stuff:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ng9
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Ngq
Automatic sugar cane farm:
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njf
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Njt
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/Nj1
http://www.kaise123.com/imgupload/NjO
I am working on other redstone thing. I tried to make an elevator but it was too fast so I destroyed it. Now i will make other thing.
Thanks for the comments (baroom, joaonaruto6 and Officialguy)!!! Thanks for reading!

I've just waiting for the new redstone build to check the complexity, but I'm not entirely sure if you're still going for this rank when you've applied for Mod.   As for the information section, it's still a lacking a bit, but I'll let it slide due to your willingness to constantly improve on the application.

[olei]

Oh sorry, I have left this application here and tried to apply for mod. I won´t use this application so you can lock it, I think.

[baroompsycho]

Alright no problem.

Denied and locked.